Thursday 24 March 2011

DPS drafts: page 2.

DPS page 2:




This is my starting point for the second page of my DPS. I had decided on one of the images that was going to be used and had started to add some sort of text at the top of the page. I had also added in my giant speech marks, something which is seen in many magazines.




Second draft:



In my second draft I have added more text to start the article off as well as adding another image at the top, to show even more of 'Alice'. I have also added in the yellow lines which add structure to the piece as well as adding interest.

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